2015年9月5日托福寫作回憶和解析
來源：環球教育
小編：環球教育 231綜合點評 | ||
本次考試的綜合寫作較為簡單，基本與之前難度持平。動物類與生物類話題是綜合寫作中的常見話題， 考生要多多練習此類型話題的題目，推薦TPO4 和TPO26。 此次綜合寫作的話題與托福閱讀TPO30（Role of Play in Development)相重合，考生可以仔細閱讀一下。并且建議考生在參加考試前一定要多多刷題，融匯貫通其中的內容。 | ||
綜合寫作 | ||
話題分類 | 動物類話題 | |
考題回憶 | 總論點 | 為什么動物小時候需要玩耍 |
閱讀部分 | 文章指出動物的玩耍是有正面意義的，是為了長大之后能夠很好生存。第一個理由是因為有多余的能量必須用掉所以要玩。第二個理由是這是instinct—practice，動物在以后為了生存而鍛煉的。比如捕食。第三個理由是玩耍是為了培養社交能力，用老鼠舉例
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聽力部分 | 聽力里的教授認為三個解釋都是錯的，第一點舉young seal的例子，幼崽待在那兒等母親喂食，所以沒有過多的能量吸收，但還是玩耍；第二點說對某些動物，玩耍不能幫助其生存。提到了一個關于貓的研究，好像有兩個組。玩耍的那個組的貓沒有表現出更有技巧，不是更好的捕獵者。第三點說老鼠老了以后仍能建立社會關系，也就是說玩耍對于建立社會關系不是必要的。 | |
解題思路 | 在進行綜合寫作時，雖然閱讀文章會在聽力結束后再次出現，但是并不意味著不要閱讀文章，實際上應該更多地將閱讀中的內容轉換成有用信息，不僅要預測聽力中的內容還要將閱讀中的一些生詞積累，不打無把握的仗。
推薦使用模板寫作 In the lecture, the professor made several points about ...... .the professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that ......The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to.... Contrary to the belief in the passage that …the professor says that… because… The professor also points out that… According to the reading passage,. However, the professor holds the different opinion, which is that… The professor refutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that… So the lecturer has totally different ideas on the topics made in the passage. | |
參考范文 | The professor actually contradicts the statements made in the passage. He claims that the purpose of playing is not for future learning but for fun.
First, the professor contradicts the issue in the reading passage that animals consume extra energy via playing due to their incapacity of energy management. He supports his idea by presenting the example of young seals who have less energy before their mother brings back foods but still like to play.
Second, the lecturer illustrates a research conducted by scientists in which two groups of cats were tested separately. One group of rats was taught how to play when they were young while another group was not. The results turned that none of them were skilled at hunting. The reading passage, however, states an instinct practice theory and indicates that animals practice hunting skills during playing.
Third, the speaker argues that after long term observations, it can be finally proved that rats can still develop social skills even after they are mature, which directly contradicts to the idea in the reading that they have to develop relationship with other members by playing.
Thus it can be inferred that the professor challenges the passage by giving reasons as to why he thinks that animals do not play for future development. | |
獨立寫作 | ||
話題分類 | 旅游類 | |
考題回憶 | In order to attract more tourists, government should improve the safety by hiring more police or improve the appearance by improving the old buildings and streets.
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解題思路 | 建議寫成兩面倒 論點：雇傭更多的警察和改進舊建筑對于吸引游客一樣重要 第一段：雇傭更多警察會讓社會更安定，使得商人愿意做生意，舉辦各種活動，從而吸引游客 第二段：改善老建筑外貌會讓避免破舊的建筑物帶來危害，更可以讓喜歡新奇的游客觀賞到新面貌 第三段：個人觀點表達，二者并不矛盾，取決于怎樣合理分配資源 結論：兩種手段一樣重要 | |
參考范文 | With the booming of mass tourism, how to raise revenue through growing tourism has been the priority for most metropolitan authorities. Some of them believe that improving historical sites and streets can help them achieve this end while those who lay more stress on safety firmly hold the idea that hiring more police force is more important. For me, yet, it is a little bit haste to say that it is better to hire more police force than to better historical buildings in order to appeal more tourists.
On the one hand, recruiting more policemen not only can bring a sense of security for tourists traveling to international destinations, but also encourages travelers to spend more time on shopping. First, safety has always been the topmost consideration for the most travelers。Rarely do we see that a majority of tourists do not give up their traveling plans to the beautiful regions due to the safety concern. Increasing the number of police patrolling on streets can create an atmosphere of security for regions that have been suffering from the impression of lack of security in the past. In addition, strengthening the police force can also benefit the economy of tourists destinations enormously. Once those tourists for sightseeing feel security during their trip, they certainly would like to extend their staying in the place to experience the traditional cultures as well as purchasing souvenirs and gifts for their friends and families, which boosts the economy of the local area.
On the other hand, bettering the historical buildings avoids potential risks of collapse and allows easier access to the tourists resorts. Those historical sites, especially those who have stood for hundreds or even thousands of years, including Great Wall and Pyramid, have been suffering from long-term strike from nature. If no measures have been taken to better the situation, some accidents, which are often seen than not the case, would occur. Imagine if you take a traveling there, are you willing to take the risks? Moreover, it always takes time for the travelers to arrive some tourists attractions, especially those locating in remote areas due to the inconvenience of access. It is not hard to imagine that once the streets have been fixed, how much time would be saved on road, which is certainly what the travelers expect.
From my own perspective, there is no contradiction between each statement. For those tourist sites which have been troubled by severe theft and robbery problems, it is a wise choice to hire more policemen to improve the security as well as to raise the image of the city. For those historical sites, of course, more emphasis should be laid on building reconstruction and street improvement.
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